Rough Draft
Final Draft
Feedback
When I came to class to workshop my inquiry proposal, I had done as much as I could. I was not sure exactly what to do for my proposal, or the proper formatting. The workshop really helped me learn what I needed to change, and do on my own paper to get it right. When I revisited my proposal I fixed my spelling and grammar in which there were many mistakes. I also went back and changed around some of my wording to try to make the paper make more sense and sound better. The biggest change I made between the rough draft and my final draft was how I presented my inquiry questions. In the rough draft I just wrote out the questions I had with social media. In my final draft I went back and added more context, and information about the questions I had that I was going to hopefully try to answer.