Rough Draft
Final Draft
Feedback
For my annotated bibliography, I came to class with a better understanding of what needed to be done for the paper than with the inquiry proposal. In the workshop my workshop group corrected my spelling and grammar mistakes, which I changed in my paper for the final copy like in the inquiry proposal. But just like the inquiry proposal there was one area, which I changed majorly. In my rough draft I did not have any conversation through out the paper. When it came time to do revise my paper for the final copy, I added quotes and explained them to try to add some conversation through out my paper. I believe that my final version was working much better than my rough draft simply because it has much better spelling and grammar, and because it actually has some conversation through out. If I were to go back and change the paper I would try to add more conversation to it, and change some of the areas where you pointed out that needed to be changed.